上周的托福考试，很多同学表示要凉凉，听力一堆幺蛾子，阅读更是不消停，一向被大家嫌弃的口语、写作部分在这次还算是比较温暖人心……但还考到了那么多原题，没复习到的同学估计还不知道自己考到了啥。

今天咱们就写作部分来分析一番，想想你能拿多少分？

2018.10.13 写作部分

综合写作

重复20170527

喝牛奶对人身体是否好。

阅读：喝牛奶对身体不一定有好处。

1、牛奶中含有钙，可以增强人的骨骼强度（density of skeleton）。但有统计数据表明，不常喝牛奶的人并没有比经常喝牛奶人的骨折概率高。

2、牛奶中含有的抗生素对人体不好。为了防止牛生病，会用抗生素（antibiotic）来杀死牛身上的细菌（bacteria）。所以，人如果经常喝牛奶会对抗生素产生抵抗性（resistance），之后生病再服用抗生素就没有效果了。

3、牛奶中提供的营养（nutrition）并非无法取代的（irreplaceable）。人们也可以通过吃鱼、海鲜、蔬菜等食品获取这些营养物质。

听力：反驳

1、鲜牛奶中有一种物质B，容易导致人类骨折。但这种物质在发酵奶中是不存在的，所以常喝发酵奶，如酸奶，可以避免骨折。

2、对奶制品有严格的监管，会对进入市场的牛奶进行各种检测，包括进行抗生素的检测。所以，抗生素含量超过规定标准的牛奶是不允许进入市场的。

3、虽然，从其它食物中也可以获取牛奶中含有的营养物质，但是这种途径获取的营养物质数量很低。人们的日常生活中，也不可能食用如此大量的鱼、海鲜等食品来获取此类营养物质。

话题分类：综合型

解题思路：

阅读牛奶对人身体坏处加以1，2，3说明，听力中进行反驳，说并不可信。三个点的一一对应即可。

参考范文：

In the reading passage, it saysdrinking milk may not good for body.

There are three reasons to supportit. The first one is that, though milk contains calcium, it can help to increasepeople density of skeleton. However, some statistic data shows that, people whonot always drinking milk, is not show that fracture rate is higher that peoplewho always drink milk. In contrary, in the listening, it says it is notconvincing in the reading content. For the first point, there is a substance Bin fresh milk, is easy to make people fracture. But, this substance it is notexisted in clabber , so always drink clobber such as yogurt, could avoidfracture.

Secondly, in the reading passage, antibioticexists in milk which is not good for human body. In order to preventing cattleill, will use antibiotic to kill cattle body’s bacteria. Therefore, if peoplealways drink milk will resistance to antibiotic, have antibiotic if ill in thelater time will not be effective. In the listening, government has strictcontrol and supervise the dairy products. Will examine every product that willflow into market, and will examine antibiotic.

Thus，antibiotic that exceeding“standard rate” will not allowed to that market.

独立写作

重复20160924

Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement: Your job has a greatereffect on one’s overall happiness than your social life does.

话题分类：生活类

解题思路：

同意还是不同意，选择一个观点。结合例子展开讨论进行支持。

参考范文：

I agreejob has a greater effect on one’s overall happiness than social life. I alsoagree that working experience has a great effect on my future work. In my pointof view, work also has a great influence on my social life. There are tworeasons to support.

First ofall，your job decides what kind of lifeyou will lead. When we graduate, what kind of school, our diploma decides whatkind of job we will take later. Then job decide our duty, our daily routine,our income, our mind, etc. These things decide what our lives look like. Thensomewhat has a effect on our happiness. Economy decides our foundation of life.Our job has a great influence on social life. our life circle, our friend, thatkind of thing will be determined. For most people, working is origin of income.When people have no worries of economy, they will be much happier.

Secondreason is that my working experience has a great effect on my future work. Weare achieving a better life, to pursue a better development. Therefore, wealways find good chances no matter in life or work. For better development,work achievement is much more essential and important than social life. Sociallife sometimes can do nothing for our future, but sometimes work can do. Joband social life both are parts of our life. But sometimes which one is moreimportant and has great effect on our happiness, we need to balance. Working isalso a strong accomplishment of happiness, working may the main part of life,so feels in working decide your life attitude. When a person done a good job,people around him/her praise him/her, the person will feel happiness thathe/she feels a great accomplishment. Otherwise, when a person cannot do itwell, when somebody criticize him, he will feel unhappy that mood lead intolife. Therefore, working is much more take accomplishment or frustrated, thatkind of feel will easily affect our mood in life than social life.

Therefore, I agree that jobhas great effect on our overall happiness that our social life does. Plus, weneed to balance them.

2018.10.14 写作部分

综合写作

the control of yellow crazy ants

阅读：1. traps with low concentration chemicals to control invasive yellow crazy ants

2. cut broad-leaved trees where are the ants’ favorite

3. limit human activities

听力：1. chemical traps threaten native ants which should be preserved

2. ants can live in open areas with direct sunlight

3. negative impact on economy

话题分类：生物类

解题思路：

考试前应该熟悉生物话题相关考点。

参考范文：

The author of the reading passage puts forththree methods to address the invasion of yellow crazy ants. From an oppositeangle, the lecturer points out the methods are implausible due to some negativeimpact brought by the methods mentioned.

The reading passage proposes that traps withlow-concentration chemical substances is effective to control the invasionyellow ants. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the role chemical baits playon ants native to the site. Toxic chemicals may threaten the life of nativeants which should be preserved. There are no native ants in the Australianisland where, according to the reader, chemical baits are successful.

Another option advised by the author is tocut the broad-leaved trees which are the ants’ favorite. In contrast, thelecturer in the listening points out that the environments that yellow antscommonly inhabit are versatile. Open areas with direct sunlight are theirfavorite as well.

Limiting human activities, according to the written article, is one ofthe measures because these ants are clearly taking advantages of human activities to spread. The professor refutes the statement by referring to the detrimental impact on the local economy. Therefore, the measure against yellow ants is ineffective.

独立写作

Some people believe it needs to take risks to be successful, while some others argue that it should be cautious and careful. Which one do you think is better?

话题分类：成功学

解题思路：

观点：take risks

主体段1：take risks提升自信，比caution带来更多机会

主体段2：risk-taking是学习的过程

参考范文：

Life is a journey filled with a series of essential risks creating questionable outcome. We learnto walk in spite of the numerous falls we endure. Hoping to achieve success,some may be brave to take unpredictable risks, while some certainly want toavoid them. For me, it is better to go on risking what life has to offer.

To begin with,taking risks, an indicator to great confidence, is a great opportunity to standout among potential competitors. Risk-takers are viewed by some as who plungein headlong without considering the consequences. Actually, facing theadventurous aspect of life reflects the boldness in nature. Learning to swim isa typical example of risk-taking leading to success. Only by plunging into thewater first can one know how to swim. Besides, taking ventures enables whoeverare ready to risk to be more stronger and powerful in making decides,constructing an easier pathway to success. We hear stories over and over againabout cautious individuals in fear of risks who regret the fact that they nevertook any ventures when reaching the end of the course of their lives.

In addition to theexternal opportunities, taking risks serves as an inspiration for internalgrowth linking to a new path of success. In order to succeed in ventures, onehas to dedicate him or herself to prime knowledge associated to a certainfield. Before starting to fly an aeroplane which is an extremely risky job,wise risk-takers would take necessary training, being aware of dangers andtheorizing the activity. But if everyone had been afraid of thelife-threatening danger and chose to avoid potential risks carefully, no airtravel could be developed. Even the failure in the initial attempt motivates asingle person to learn from experience and evolve into a wiser, smarter andmore knowledgeable person. The experience of swallowing water obtained in theprocess of learning to swim improves our ability to tolerate water.

In conclusion, as the old saying goes “No ventures, no gain”, successentails risks. The external and internal gains force us to go on taking risksinstead of taking care.

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