来源:北外雅思托福培训学院
时间: 2013/7/22 17:29:00
盲点1 : 长篇累牍
和用词上的大词连篇一样,部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。
盲点1 击破: 长短结合原则
事实上,如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话,会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用,而且论点通常用短句,而论据则长句居多。
盲点2 : 短小精悍
和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,为了保险起见,这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are 的主系表和主谓宾句型。
盲点2击破: 灵活多变原则
这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive 一些,他们将是考场上较大的“黑马”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability 这个简单句为例,通过强调句型的包装我们得到:
It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications.
通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到:
So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability .
通过插入语的包装我们可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents.
通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability .
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通过如此灵活的加工和包装,你会发现,简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人,这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。
总之, 掌握了如上原则,再加上持之以恒的练习,考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。
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